Expert Personal Statement

If you're stuck with your personal statement, who better to give you advice that the people who will be reading your statement to consider offering you a place? We spoke to our lecturers and our course enquiries team for their top tips.

Rosemarie Lowe

Programme Director Early Childhood Studies

School of Education

Quirky quotations are never original...don't bother! It's more important to explore what skills and interests you have, as well as your experiences and how they demonstrate you would be an asset to the course and the university, don't just repeat the qualifications you have, or what you are studying, all of that information is already on the form.

Show a real interest in the subject, remember the application will be seen by as many institutions you apply for so don't make it too specific. If you are applying for a number of courses that are similar, but not the same, explain how they are connected and how and why they all interest you.

Make sure you meet the entry requirements.  Look at GCSEs or equivalent that are required, if practical experience is necessary then demonstrate you have done this and more importantly what you have learnt from it. If you are planning to get the experience required outline how and when and what you anticipate learning from it.

Get someone to check your statement - school teachers, tutors even parents! Check for clarity of written English, this is not the time to make punctuation or spelling errors.

Nicki Schiessel Harvey

Built Environment

They are looking for students to demonstrate knowledge of and enthusiasm for the built environment industries. They want students to show that they understand what the industry is about and what it is about a career in the built environment that excites them. (a lot of people don’t have a clear picture of what ‘built environment’ means, so they would expect that prospective students do understand what the course involves.) It’s also good to show how your skills, such as team work or communication, can be applied to your studies.

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Shona McQuillan

Pre-Entry Enquiries Manager

Pre-Entry Enquiries Team

A good personal statement should:

  • Provide the admissions tutor with relevant background information about you.
  • Reflect the distinctive style and characteristics of its author – admissions tutors are not seeking to admit clones.

Include some reference to your future plans or careers aspirations. This is important if you are applying for a vocational course, but don’t worry if you aren’t sure what you want to do when you leave university.

  • Explain why you have chosen that particular subject and supply concrete evidence of your enthusiasm for it. What is it about the course you’ve chosen that made you select it over other subjects? What’s involved in the course you’re applying for? What sort of skills does it involve – practical, analytical, research? What can you draw on from your previous studies or work experience which help to demonstrate your suitability for the course? If the course leads to a professional qualification, what qualities do you have which lend well to that professional area?
  • Show that you are positive and motivated.
  • Be written in clear and concise English.

David Gibson

Digital Technology

He expects students to show an interest in their area of study, through their hobbies and activities. He also wants students who take an interest in extra-curricular activities and are pro-active in doing things outside their work.

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Most of your grades and standardized test scores are settled by now, so the personal statement is your last chance to add something new to your college applications that shows you in your very best light. So—how to do this?

An effective personal statement is well-written, avoids cliches, tells a story about you that shows the admissions committee who you are, and brags a little—but doesn’t show off.

I’ve compiled a list of personal statement ‘dos’ and ‘don’ts’ to help you as you work your way through your first few drafts. For even more help with the college admissions process, including boosting that standardized test score, consider taking an SAT prep course or ACT prep course with Prep Expert.

Do Tell A Story

To keep admissions officers interested, tell a story about yourself, rather than write a traditional five-paragraph essay.

Admissions officers read thousands of personal statements every year. You want yours to be compelling and memorable. So, be creative—think about an experience or an aspect of your biography that’s special to you, and write about that.

Avoid topics admissions officers are likely to read about over and over again in other personal statements. Plenty of people have volunteered for Habitat for Humanity or been captain of their high school basketball team, for example. Remember, you want to stand out—so, if you do write about something like this, put your own unique spin on it.

Do Brag About Yourself

It’s a personal statement—it’s okay to write about your strengths and accomplishments.

Most people aren’t comfortable bragging about themselves. But that is exactly what you should do in your personal statement. Talk about your accomplishments, good deeds, moments where you made yourself proud—just be sure to do so tastefully.

How do you strike this balance? Show, don’t tell.

Don’t tell the admissions committee you’re a good person—show them you’re a good person by writing about a good deed that you performed. Don’t tell them you’re the best basketball player in the state—set the scene and describe how you led your teammates to victory in the championship game. A good rule of thumb here is to try and use verbs, rather than adjectives.

Do Respect Word Limits

Overworked admissions officers won’t agree you’re worth more of their time than other applicants—so keep your personal statement within the word limit.

Most colleges and universities will have a word limit for personal statements. And, while you might think you have a particularly compelling story to tell, and therefore need a few more paragraphs or pages than are allowed, don’t give into this temptation.

While being over by a couple words isn’t a huge problem—admissions officers aren’t going to count your personal statement word for word—going way over the word limit will not be a plus for your application. As mentioned, admissions officers have to read thousands of personal statements every year—so don’t go and give them extra homework.

And besides, you can tell a great story about yourself without going over the word limit. Being confined to five paragraphs or a couple of pages will force you to get rid of unnecessary details and write only about the most important and interesting aspects of your story.

If you’re having trouble meeting the word limit, on the other hand, you probably don’t have enough to say about the topic you’ve selected. Go back to the drawing board and try telling a different story.

Do Obey The Rules Of Grammar

It’s okay to use a more personal style of writing, but admissions officers want to know you can write well—check your spelling, and follow the rules of grammar.

Your personal statement is not the place to use slang or casual language. But do show off your command of vocabulary—you want your personal statement to show you’re ready for college-level writing.

Do Personalize Your Statement

Be sure to reference the school you’re applying to in your personal statement— but don’t accidentally tell Yale how much you’re hoping to attend Harvard.

Even if you’re using the Common Application, you should tailor your personal statement to each school to which you’re applying. Mention the school in your closing paragraph, for example.

It’s fine to recycle the same personal statement for several applications—almost everyone does this—but don’t simply use the find-and-replace function to change the name of the school and be done with it. Do a thorough once-over to make sure you haven’t accidentally mentioned how much you want to attend Duke in the personal statement you’re sending to Georgetown. (This might seem like a no-brainer, but admissions officials report goofs like this happen all the time.)

Do Get Feedback

Have a few people look over your personal statement for you before you submit it—both to catch typos, and to assess its strengths and weaknesses.

After all the writing you’ll be doing, you’ll need a few other pairs of eyes to help you see what you’ve been missing.

So, once you’ve written a draft of your personal statement, it’s a good idea to show it to others—friends, parents, teachers—and ask their opinions. Do they think you’ve done a good job introducing yourself to the admissions committee? Did you misspell the college’s name or leave a comma out of place?

Don’t Restate Your Resume

Don’t use your personal statement to repeat information admissions officers can find in other parts of your application.

You want your personal statement to stand out in a sea of applicants, and you also want to show a side of you that isn’t shown in the other parts of your application. So, don’t make the mistake that many applicants make and simply write a laundry list of your extracurricular activities and academic accomplishments. Admissions officials can already get this information by looking at your application and high school transcript.

Don’t Write About Sensitive Topics

Don’t write about anything that might make the reader feel awkward or uncomfortable—your personal statement should be positive and uplifting.

There are certain topics—domestic violence or sexual assault, for example—that might have had a profound impact on your life. You might be tempted to write about these things, as a way to show how you have successfully overcome adversity. Don’t.

Not to downplay these experiences and their importance to your life, but these topics, and others like them, are simply too sensitive to write about in a brief personal statement. It’s not a bad idea to write about how you have overcome adversity, but the general thrust of your personal statement should be positive, and leave your reader feeling good, not uncomfortable.

Don’t Have Someone Else Write Your Personal Statement For You

Admissions officers will be able to tell if you’ve had someone else write your personal statement, so make sure the writing is all yours.

This might seem like another no-brainer, but each year, plenty of applicants have someone else write their personal statements for them, thinking that asking a stronger writer or a native speaker to pen their essay will leave their application in better shape.

However, admissions committees are alert to this practice, and if the your ‘voice’ in your personal statement is significantly different from the one in your SAT or ACT Essay, admissions officers are going to know they’re not reading your writing.

Submitting someone else’s work as your own—also known as plagiarism—is not a good look for your application, and might result in an automatic ding.

Don’t Forget To Show Some Self-Awareness

Show admissions officers you’re self-aware by avoiding topics that might make you look spoiled or insensitive.

Be aware of the advantages you’ve grown up with. Plenty of students want to write about their life-changing trip to Costa Rica—but, unless you do so in a way that shows true cultural awareness or engagement with global issues, all you’re really doing is bragging about a really cool vacation that you took. And that’s not something an admissions officer wants to read about while sitting with a giant pile of applications their desk.

Nor is this type of personal statement likely to reflect well upon you against other applicants, who are writing about topics like being the first in their family to attend college, overcoming an illness, or being an immigrant, for example. Just take a minute to think about how your choice of topic will come across, and you should be fine.

Don’t Wait Until The Last Minute To Write It

If you write your personal statement the same day as its due, it’s not going to be as good as it needs to be to make a difference in your college admissions chances.

Don’t deprive yourself of the opportunity to write something that’ll catch an admissions officer’s eye, and help you stand out among thousands of other applicants, by procrastinating on your personal statement.

An effective, well-written personal statement takes requires some serious time and thought to do. You should try and get started on it in the summer before your senior year, so when school begins all you have left to do is dot those I's and cross those t’s.

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